Good effort, but no cigar...
The face looks swollen or fat on one side.. It looks like you begun the drawing head on but then decided to make it go at an angle half way through... It just looks weird.
I do enjoy the idea of the image but I just feel like it could've been executed more smoothly.
That's actually quite good if that's actually yours, I think you should expand on it.
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